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When I get a chance, and after it's edited (round one), I'll post it up here.

First 4 chapters. I need the motivation from you guys to keep writing, anyway.

<3


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30 DAYS EPILOGUE:


…otherwise known as a giant author’s note, masquerading as an epilogue.

So now that I’ve finished writing the ROUGH DRAFT of this fanfiction, there are several things I’d like to say.

There are some glaring plotlines I forgot, forego-ed, and fucked up altogether. I’m aware that I forgot some things like the “Him-dar” shit and the boys’ birthday (which is definitely NOT THE SAME as the Powerpuff Girls… duh.) and SO much more. I will fix them if I choose to hardcore edit this story later. I’ll answer questions, though, because it’ll benefit me and you. ^_^

I know my grammar was not perfect, and I know for a fact some of my mistakes were rather humorous (“Boomer rubbed his aching…” wha?! It was his stomach, by the way.) I guess many of us skipped stuff like that in the editing process. We’re human, and this isn’t professional. XD

I will admit now that I wrote this story with more of a purpose than having a story to tell. See, there’s a lot of Powerpuff Girls fanfiction, right? Well, there’s a lot of good stuff, and a lot of bad stuff. Some people are highly critical of RRB/PPG pairings in particular, but to be fair, some of the worst ones are in fact RRB/PPG pairings. X__X So I wanted to write a valid story, to prove to the snobs that there CAN be a decent/good RRB/PPG story, and to prove to the, well, newbies that you don’t need constant lemons/fluff/high school/etc. for your story to be good. Now, before people think I’m a bitch, let me clarify that I don’t think highly of myself or my writing. From the gaping plotholes to the ridiculous grammar mistakes, clearly I’m not that great of an author. But it’s not that difficult to tell a good story, guys, and it breaks my heart to see some good stories plummet because of AWFUL grammar, or just too much distracting sex and bullshit to be readable. AAAAAAAND, just because it’s RRB/PPG, doesn’t mean it can’t possibly be a good story. XP

Last but not least, I do have an announcement: yes, there will be a sequel. But I need much more time to develop it, so you probably won’t see much of it until later this year at the earliest. It’s called “Unbridled,” and the deviantart people can view the pictures in the Unbridled folder.

In the mean time, I’d appreciate all the criticism, questions, and comments you can dish to me. It helps me learn and develop as a writer, and since I do plan on being one, I need all the help I can get.

Thank you all for reading, though, and a special thanks to all the people who edited for me. And an even bigger thanks to everyone who encouraged me to continue, because God knows I wouldn’t have if no one did.

Catch you later.

~~ Hermeown